This is our second draft of our storyboard. After the various discussions and tasks we have been carrying out, we realsied we needed to make spme changes to make this more effective. The key changes are in the structure as we felt that we did not have enough structure and the opening might be too disjointed do we have tried to look for some graphic matches e.g. matching the shape of the pizza slice to the time on the clock and so on to make the sequence run with more fluency. We have also slightly reduced the number of characters based on our teacher's concerns about how we would manage the filming.
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