The font doesn't really stand out too well, specifically on the 'Jack Cahill' bit. The music works well, slow but good. Didn't really get the end/ great cameo from james, bravo. Well done. Beat Michael to it. boom!
This is a really good edit, the gambling scene fits together really well. I think you should change the font and colour of your titles as they don't really stand out.
This is a good start and I like the story. I agree the font is maybe not right for the style but I like where your credits go. I agree the end is a bit abrupt but I like it, it makes you jump.
Your ideas are good and the whole thing works well, although it does take the girl a long time to get the letter out of her bag. Apart from that teh filming is good although you may need to adjust the sound sometimes.
I like the idea and the editing style is very clear - very hustle! i agree the girl takes a long time to get the envelope out but it doesn't really matter.
Like it, i like this kind of film anyway. I like the filming at the end, its effective. Well done. Not sure about the looks to camera, i know its like hustle but not sure if it works.
You look like you've done lots of work on this so well done! I looked at some of the rest of your blog and its really good, you did a lot of planning! Back to your film, I like it, where is the title?
Maybe the box scene is a bit slow but i think that's ok in an opening sequence. I like it. Is the main character a double agent? Why is he locking someone in the shed at the beginning?
The font doesn't really stand out too well, specifically on the 'Jack Cahill' bit. The music works well, slow but good. Didn't really get the end/ great cameo from james, bravo. Well done. Beat Michael to it. boom!
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good edit, the gambling scene fits together really well. I think you should change the font and colour of your titles as they don't really stand out.
ReplyDeletemichael
The font is a bit soft it needs to stand out more. However there editing was good and the piece fitted together well.
ReplyDeleteJames
This is a good start and I like the story. I agree the font is maybe not right for the style but I like where your credits go. I agree the end is a bit abrupt but I like it, it makes you jump.
ReplyDeleteJess
I think you have made a good start. You might need more tracks to make a change in style for the end? But I like it and I think it will work out well.
ReplyDeleteErin
Your ideas are good and the whole thing works well, although it does take the girl a long time to get the letter out of her bag. Apart from that teh filming is good although you may need to adjust the sound sometimes.
ReplyDeleteSteph
Really good, well done! Hope ours turns out this well.
ReplyDeleteHollie
Think your doing very well. Agree about font but like where you have put credits. Title? John
ReplyDeleteI like the idea and the editing style is very clear - very hustle! i agree the girl takes a long time to get the envelope out but it doesn't really matter.
ReplyDeleteSarah
Poker scene really well done and genre is clear. Good!
ReplyDeleteJonas
Like it, i like this kind of film anyway. I like the filming at the end, its effective. Well done. Not sure about the looks to camera, i know its like hustle but not sure if it works.
ReplyDeleteharry
Agree poker scene is good and i like the end scene too. Agree about font and title?
ReplyDeleteMikey
\Well done, we are doing heist too so we might steal some ideas! Just kidding. It's good, i like the box scene although its maybe a bit slow.
ReplyDeleteRobert
You look like you've done lots of work on this so well done! I looked at some of the rest of your blog and its really good, you did a lot of planning! Back to your film, I like it, where is the title?
ReplyDeleteRachel
This is so good there's not much to say! Just that its true about the font.
ReplyDeleteGemma
Maybe the box scene is a bit slow but i think that's ok in an opening sequence. I like it. Is the main character a double agent? Why is he locking someone in the shed at the beginning?
ReplyDeleteFarrell
Like it a lot. Maybe the bag / envelope bit could be tidies up but its ok, just if you get time. Well done, you must be a good group!
ReplyDeleteCaitlin
its good you don't need my help!
ReplyDeleteLiam
I like it especially the poker scene when they look round. Agree about credits.
ReplyDeleteTina
Where does title go? Good though. Good luck with finishing it.
ReplyDeleteIsla
its pretty good, i didnt get why the main person locked someone in the shed either but maybe that gets explained later in the film.
ReplyDeletejake
I think hes working for the man at the beginnong and end and the others dont know? Its good.
ReplyDeleteHarriet
i think hes the one who finds him and reports to the boss. agree about credits. keep going.
ReplyDeleteBilly
Its nearly finsihed and looks good. Well done.
ReplyDeleteShannon